Meh no offence or anything but most of his sentences included in this app are run-on sentences >_<
I would link other shorter apps that got approved with poor grammar and in general English, but there's too many to list.
MY WHOLE POINT HERE:
You're giving your opinions on the applicant, not the application itself. Any admin with the ability to lock and deny or approve the app can see the application. Posting comments on applications is for the sake of helping the admins chose to approve or deny, and to show if the person is generally liked and trusted, not if the printed application is to people's standards lol. (unless it's missing necessary information)
Sorry for derailed the app btw, just felt it should be said seeing as I see this all too often.