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Song I Made :)
« on: January 07, 2011, 07:52:40 PM »
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Ok so as I have been listening to deadmau5 recently he has got me into making music and I wanted to share with you my first attempt at making music lol. I think it turned out decent, I know it could use a lot more but it's good for the first song I have ever made. Please give feedbax!

BTW this is the same program deadmau5 uses, and its supposed to be electro house/techno. But i think it turned out more to be trance.

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Re: Song I Made :)
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2011, 09:11:09 PM »
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Very staticy, the music, not my headset im sure. Maybe more of a clean tune would work better?

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« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2011, 09:21:55 PM »
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its def not the tune. possibly your sound card?

edit: actually i kinda see what you are saying, it might be that i overlapped 2 synthesizers to bring out the sound a bit. I thought it sounded pretty cool, but meh, pickers can't be choosers.
« Last Edit: January 07, 2011, 09:25:16 PM by Carp »

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« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2011, 09:31:05 PM »
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Lol, the choruses just sound a bit, if you will-fuzzy.

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« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2011, 09:40:51 PM »
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thanks for telling me this, of course this isn't my final version. But i put a few effects on the track that you are talking about and that may be the static that you are talking about. Or it might be just the synthesizer.

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« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 10:03:39 PM »
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25.2MB Wav.



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Damn nigga, real naic.

Just repetative. (You only used three different patters...?)

But I guess that goes with the Genre. Techno/Trance/ect aren't really my forte'.
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« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 10:08:42 PM »
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wow i didn't even notice lol, im not sure why its that big o.o

I'm uploading a youtube video, i edited it a bit to make it better, so you can check it out in a little bit if you want to.
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« Reply #7 on: January 07, 2011, 11:33:27 PM »
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sorry for double post, just wanted to reply back to you so you could see this.

Electro house is very repetetive i noticed, and as i said this isn't the final version its just a skeletal frame for what i'm going to be doing with it later on. This is an example of a good electro house song.

deadmau5 & Kaskade - I Remember

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Re: Song I Made :)
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 01:39:50 AM »
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lol deadmau5 has songs that are slow and relaxing. Then theres songs that are fast and in ur face.

Anyways, most of his songs are cool. I got into liking him because one of his songs were used on a lockerz redemption alerter lolol.

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« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2011, 01:58:43 AM »
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wow i didn't even notice lol, im not sure why its that big o.o

I'm uploading a youtube video, i edited it a bit to make it better, so you can check it out in a little bit if you want to.

It's because it's uncompressed.

And ehh, like I said, it's just not my type of music. :c


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« Reply #10 on: January 08, 2011, 02:28:13 PM »
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good fist pumping music.

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Re: Song I Made :)
« Reply #11 on: January 08, 2011, 07:13:55 PM »
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I like the synth though. Mind sending me a sample of it? I have yet to find a decent sounding synth.

Also, the final version is a lot better.

Can't wait to see what else you make!


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Re: Song I Made :)
« Reply #12 on: January 08, 2011, 07:29:13 PM »
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So thats what Carps listen to. I like it.
Nice job.
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« Reply #13 on: January 08, 2011, 07:36:03 PM »
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http://www.mediafire.com/?udz8ve8q5gtza1x

I couldn't remember where i dl'd it from so i uploaded it for you. Has a lot of cool presets i'm sure there are a ton of other things you can do with it too.

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« Reply #14 on: January 08, 2011, 07:43:24 PM »
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http://www.mediafire.com/?udz8ve8q5gtza1x

I couldn't remember where i dl'd it from so i uploaded it for you. Has a lot of cool presets i'm sure there are a ton of other things you can do with it too.

Sweet. Thanks c:

Out of curiosity, what sound program do you use?

My process is to usually set up the patterns and sequences in modplug, and then use audacity to add effects and mix.


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