Stop trying to make your guide so similar to mine ;_;
You even copied my shitty joke with SMasters in the credits :/
Anyway, I have only flown over it and found loads of grammar/spelling mistakes, which doesn't really look good on a major guide.
And in my opinion, the layout is terrible ... Making things look big does not equal in quality, try to keep the layout organized and simple, yet easy to use. Also try to write more on certain things - abstain from only writing one little sentence about something, elaborate about any possible bonus points/extras something might have! It looks much better that way.
Some pictures would've been nice as well - if you're gonna use Cake's/my layout, at least do it at an equal quality.
Even though this sounds rather negative, I haven't actually taken the time to properly read this yet, so I might give you more points I've noticed later on.
Still, I love the way you showed all the topics in the beginning.