i found this.

[Supertoaster]

My Mommy told me so;
I'm not quite sure what I did wrong,
But I thought that you might know.

When I woke up this morning,
I knew that she was mad;
Cause she was crying awful hard,
And yelling at my dad.

I tried my best to be real good,
And do just what she said;
I cleaned my room all by myself,
I even made my bed.

But I spilled milk on my good shirt,
When she yelled at me to hurry;
And I guess she didn't hear me,
When I told her I was sorry.

'Cause she hit me awful hard, you see,
And called me funny names;
And told me I was really bad,
And I should be ashamed!

When I said, "I love you, Mommy,"
I guess she didn't understand;
Cause she yelled at me to shut my mouth.
Or I'd get smacked again.

So I came up here to talk to you,
Please tell me what to do;
'Cause I really love my Mommy,
And I know she loves me, too.

And I don't think my Mommy means,
To hit me quite so hard;
I guess sometimes, grown ups forget
How really big they are!

So Teddy, I wish you were real,
And you weren't just a bear;
Then you could help me find a way
To tell Mommies everywhere.

To please try hard to understand.
How sad it makes us feel;
'Cause the outside pain soon goes a way,
But the inside never heals!

And if we could make them listen,
Maybe then they'd understand;
So other children just like me,
Wouldn't have to hurt again.

But for now, I guess I'll hold you tight,
And pretend the pain's not there;
I know you'd never hurt me,
So Goodnight, Teddy Bear!

[Frank]

Oh man, that's so awful


Fuck you, violence. Fuck you.

[Supertoaster]

wrong section, move to literature please

Oh man, that's so awful


Fuck you, violence. Fuck you.

yeah it made me cry a bit, i don't usually cry when reading things but this

[·UηİŦ··]

I need to stop reading these.

Insta-Depressing.

Especially cause it's true most of the time.

[Dale Feles]

Especially cause it's true most of the time.

This  :'(

[Sabb]

I need to stop reading these.

Insta-Depressing.

Especially cause it's true most of the time.

You're only assuming it's true though.

For all you know, this could have just been made up as a poem for publicity and clicks or w/e.

[Hotgreensoldier]

*takes some pain pills*

What? Pain pills work as anti-depressants for me....DON'T JUDGE MEEEEEE!!!!11!1!one

[Tomcat]

Some one did this for forensics last year

1 person just started crying then laughing

[Peetah]

Real sad poem.
I cant relate so I aint sad.

[Frank]

You're only assuming it's true though.

For all you know, this could have just been made up as a poem for publicity and clicks or w/e.

Man, that's not the point. The thing is that this reminds of domestical violence, which is awful. Is like saying that publicty for some product talking about people dying of lung cancer isn't bad just because it's publicity.

[Deacon]

Man, that's not the point. The thing is that this reminds of domestical violence, which is awful. Is like saying that publicty for some product talking about people dying of lung cancer isn't bad just because it's publicity.

domestical?
publicty?

lol.

[Sabb]

Man, that's not the point. The thing is that this reminds of domestical violence, which is awful. Is like saying that publicty for some product talking about people dying of lung cancer isn't bad just because it's publicity.

Uh, what.

I was just pointing out something that he may not have considered?
I wasn't suggesting the poem was good, bad, sad, or not, or what ever else you're getting at?

[Frank]

Uh, what.

I was just pointing out something that he may not have considered?
I wasn't suggesting the poem was good, bad, sad, or not, or what ever else you're getting at?

I meant that the purpose of the text doesn't change the meaning.

[Sabb]

I meant that the purpose of the text doesn't change the meaning.

Ah, I see what you're saying.

But the reason I posted that wasn't because I was implying that it meant something different or the meaning was now insufficient. I was only trying to explain that most of the stories you hear like this aren't actually real stories of someone's life or something, which to most people, like Unit, would make the story all the more sad.

[Frank]

Ah, I see what you're saying.

But the reason I posted that wasn't because I was implying that it meant something different or the meaning was now insufficient. I was only trying to explain that most of the stories you hear like this aren't actually real stories of someone's life or something, which to most people, like Unit, would make the story all the more sad.

Ah, okay.