Kinda in a bad situation... Anybody read the book "Ender's Game"?

[Pryvisee]

Well my class has been assigned a "Major writing assignment" and shit. What we have to do is do a profile of the person, do a timeline, write a paper and present it. I've done the timeline and the profile, but I'm stuck writing the paper.

Alright this is what the part says:

Part C - Connect to the Text (140 points)

This part of your project should be in a ONE-PAGE essay (MLA) format.  The questions you should discuss (in any order) are as follows:
-What does it mean to be a leader?
-Was power (or respect, if not a political leader) given or taken by your person?
-Which qualities does your person share with Ender (give examples of choices/events your person has made that show this). 
-Was your person a leader or just influential?

The person I chose was Steven Spielburg. Now, I don't know jack shit about him, and I haven't really read the book. So I'm totally stuck.

Also this project is worth about 300pts and if I don't do it, I don't graduate.



This is what I have so far.

Dillon Fahey

Mrs. Q.

A4 English – World Leader Paper

13 January 2011

Steven Spielberg

Steven Spielberg revolutionized the art of making movies. He has done major hit’s in his movie making career. He has done, “Jaws”, “E.T” and “Saving Private Ryan” to name a few. And he has also executively produced others like “Transformers” one and two.  He has to be a great leader in the career of making movies.

Don't laugh, lol

[Sabb]

Dear Dillon Fahey,

          I suggest minimizing the use of the phrase "he has done", to provide more variety and creativity to your paper.

Sincerely,                                                         
Thatuselessfaggot Fromtheinternet

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Sorry, but that's all I can contribute lol. I haven't read the book unfortunately, wish I could help.

[Pryvisee]

Dear Dillon Fahey,

          I suggest minimizing the use of the phrase "he has done", to provide more variety and creativity to your paper.

Sincerely,                                                         
Thatuselessfaggot Fromtheinternet

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Sorry, but that's all I can contribute lol. I haven't read the book unfortunately, wish I could help.

Ahh yes. Didn't notice I used that sentence like 3 times.

[Frank]

If only...


"Hit's"...


Hits.

[ursus]

Oh fuck, Ender's Game is my favorite book of ALL TIME. Not even kidding.

I don't even know how Steven Spielberg is like Ender. Have you even read the book?

[Pryvisee]

Oh fuck, Ender's Game is my favorite book of ALL TIME. Not even kidding.

I don't even know how Steven Spielberg is like Ender. Have you even read the book?

Shiiiit. We were just talking about this on steam.. 

Should of asked you if you read the book.

EDIT: Well I've gotten the last parts of the paper.
I just need somone to proof read it.

Dillon Fahey

Mrs. Q.

A4 English – World Leader Paper

13 January 2011

Steven Spielberg

      Steven Spielberg revolutionized the art of making movies. He’s done major hits in his movie making career. He has done, “Jaws”, “E.T” and “Saving Private Ryan” to name a few. And he has also executively produced others like “Transformers” one and two.  He’s a great leader and a idol to people wanting to produce or direct a movie.

       The respect Steven Spielberg has landed him in all sorts of places. From the Emmy’s to guest staring on TV shows. The respect started when he released the film “E.T”. It was a amazing film back in the day and still is. Almost everyone knows the name Steven Spielberg.

       Steven Spielberg has struggled through life and succeeded with a dream. The divorce of Steven Spielbergs parents was devastating and Ender’s break up with his family was an example of that. Ender had a hard decision to make. Go with colonel Graff or stay with his parents. Much like Steven had to choose between which parent to go with. Each of which, turned out to be a good decision.

Eh?

[ursus]

       The respect Steven Spielberg has landed him in all sorts of places. From the Emmy’s to guest staring on TV shows.

Emmys doesn't have an apostrophe. You spelled "starring" wrong. There needs to be a comma inbetween "places" and "From", not a period. The first sentence isn't even an actual sentence.

[Pryvisee]

Emmys doesn't have an apostrophe. You spelled "starring" wrong. There needs to be a comma inbetween "places" and "From", not a period. The first sentence isn't even an actual sentence.

Thanks! Any more that needs to be corrected?

[ursus]

Thanks! Any more that needs to be corrected?

Dillon Fahey

Mrs. Q.

A4 English – World Leader Paper

13 January 2011

Steven Spielberg

      Steven Spielberg revolutionized the art of making movies, as well as having done major hits in his career. He has produced “Jaws”, “E.T.” and “Saving Private Ryan”, to name a few. He has also held the position of executive producer for others like the more recent "Transformers" productions.  He’s a great leader and a role model to people wanting to produce or direct a movie.

       The respect Steven Spielberg commandeers has landed him in all sorts of places, from the Emmys to guest starring on TV shows. His fame all started when he released the film “E.T”. It was an amazing film for its time and still is. As an indirect result of this, almost everyone in our modern day and age knows the name Steven Spielberg.

       Steven Spielberg has struggled through life with nothing more than a dream, and succeeded. The divorce of Steven Spielberg's parents was devastating to him, and Ender’s parting with his family was a similar example of that. Ender had a hard decision to make: Go with colonel Graff or stay with his parents and sister Valentine. This is much like how Steven had to choose between which parent to go with, each of which turned out to be a good decision.

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It's still not a great paper, but I just made it suck a little less.

[Pryvisee]

Dillon Fahey

Mrs. Q.

A4 English – World Leader Paper

13 January 2011

Steven Spielberg

      Steven Spielberg revolutionized the art of making movies, as well as having done major hits in his career. He has produced “Jaws”, “E.T.” and “Saving Private Ryan”, to name a few. He has also held the position of executive producer for others like the more recent "Transformers" productions.  He’s a great leader and a role model to people wanting to produce or direct a movie.

       The respect Steven Spielberg commandeers has landed him in all sorts of places, from the Emmys to guest starring on TV shows. His fame all started when he released the film “E.T”. It was an amazing film for its time and still is. As an indirect result of this, almost everyone in our modern day and age knows the name Steven Spielberg.

       Steven Spielberg has struggled through life with nothing more than a dream, and succeeded. The divorce of Steven Spielberg's parents was devastating to him, and Ender’s parting with his family was a similar example of that. Ender had a hard decision to make: Go with colonel Graff or stay with his parents and sister Valentine. This is much like how Steven had to choose between which parent to go with, each of which turned out to be a good decision.

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It's still not a great paper, but I just made it suck a little less.

I... Love.. u.

Thanks so much!

[Tomcat]

And this is why lrn to read lol


uhh Cheat codes in  your paper LOL

[Pryvisee]

And this is why lrn to read lol


uhh Cheat codes in  your paper LOL

lolol. I suck at "PROPER SENTENCE STURCTURR" and "GRAMMAR".

And it's not necessarily cheating. It's more like. Someone proof reading, redoing it and helping online. unawmean?

[Tomcat]

lolol. I suck at "PROPER SENTENCE STURCTURR" and "GRAMMAR".

you know

I did that on purpose

[Pryvisee]

you know

I did that on purpose

Yeah I know.
lol, I'm just quoting gamefreak lululul

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8:31 PM - §§™ Pryvisee: thanks!
8:31 PM - gamefreak: just for the love of god
8:31 PM - gamefreak: YOU NEED GRAMMAR
8:31 PM - gamefreak: AND PROPER SENTENCE STURCTURR.

[Cheesicle]

The only thing I can contribute is that I recommend you not put the Transformers part in there... They both sucked major balls.

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Number 1 sucked slightly less, but regardless, they both sucked.