Pokèmon adventure Comic

[Seb]

The top right one? Yeah I sat there like "goddammit which angle do I DO THIS." so I apologize for it looking a bit whack, but it's not terrible at least lol.

...I meant the bottom one. I didn't even notice that one until now.

[○ Μαρία ○]

...I meant the bottom one. I didn't even notice that one until now.

I don't even see a problem with the bottom one lol

[Seb]

I don't even see a problem with the bottom one lol

How do you see a problem with the top one and not the bottom one?

[Infinimint]

Can I be a random trainer? 

[Purple]

>seb gives criticism
alright
>I agree a little less harshly and also point another small thing out but still says it doesn't matter
-1

oookay ;

[Ἆxule]

it kind of looks weird but it might just be the lab coat or just the way it was drawn idk
when i first saw it i kind of looked at it like this a little ( sorry its so messy, hopefully you'll see what I mean )

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kind of pointed something else out as well. i'm pretty sure that's wot seb was talking about, looks kind of curved, but yea it might just be the lab coat or the way you sketched it that made it look weird idk, doesn't really matter that much imo

I don't know what you guys are going on about. It looks fine to me

[○ Μαρία ○]

I don't know what you guys are going on about. It looks fine to me

I see what Seb means, someone pointed it out to me last night. The curve is just from his coat, it's not his actual arm lol. Also do keep in mind, I stated in the OP that I am trying to strictly do this in the Pokèmon style, so if lack of detail in things bothers you, I apologize. Trust me it's not my favorite style to draw in, but it's interesting for me to draw none the less.

[Seb]

I don't know what you guys are going on about. It looks fine to me

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[Sabb]

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Why do you have to try to complain about Axule? He's not the one bitching at people.
And your comment was fine, but considering Purple's situation with Marie and how in depth she goes with pointing out the most minor errors with nothing good to say it's not exactly the same.

But I don't want this shit taking up her comic thread. If there's anything else someone wants to say about it just message the person directly.

[Deathie]

Yo yo yo yo yo yo yo.

Let's not start dishing out +1's or -1'ns over something silly like this.

[Cake Faice]

Hey guys, wanna know a funny RND inside joke?

Not arguing over someone drawing a comic.

[Alphaggot]

So what happened to this, I really want to see more of it.

[Sabb]

So what happened to this, I really want to see more of it.

I haven't asked but I'm pretty sure she's just busy. She hasn't given up on it.

[○ Μαρία ○]

So what happened to this, I really want to see more of it.

Yeah I had the next page just about finished when my computer crashed so I had to redo it. It's half way done but I am out for the weekend. Also I have 2 other pages drawn. 

[Lazer Blade]

Ill take one of the gym leader spots.
Gym type: Fire
Pokemon: Volcarona, Infernape, Magmortar, Victini, Heatran, and Houndoom.

Appearance: Hazel eyes, Brown curly hair, Blue jeans, black shoes, and a orange T-shirt.
or if this helps http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/854/snapshot201208277.jpg/