My First Sketch/Post Sketches Here (PICTURE FIXED/EDITED)

[Fenix]

Hello, I drew my first sketch, a gun from Trigun, namely Vash's if you have seen the series. The original:


And then my gun:
http://campl.us/dkSCiOJNiO4

I am accepting criticism, no trolling or super fake nice comments.

Edit: The picture is fixed, clearer now.

Double Edit: I have re-named the thread, I hope you post your own sketches of items too.

[Sabb]

Might want to sketch your lines lighter and gradually work from there. The shadow on the handle is a good example, because we can see where you sketched the end of the shadow. The shadow should be gradual, or I suppose for the style you were drawing a whole value, not outlined otherwise it looks like it's the edge starting the other side.

[Deacon]

that gun (the original) is going to make me have an aneurysm.

[Seb]

Wait, what the fuck?

The hammer is where it's supposed to be, yet it shoots from the bottom chamber?

Good sketch.