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Creative Arts (Read Only) => Graphics => Topic started by: Fenix on April 13, 2012, 05:18:44 PM

Title: My First Sketch/Post Sketches Here (PICTURE FIXED/EDITED)
Post by: Fenix on April 13, 2012, 05:18:44 PM
Hello, I drew my first sketch, a gun from Trigun, namely Vash's if you have seen the series. The original:
(http://files.turbosquid.com/Preview/Content_2009_07_15__08_31_21/vashs_gun_2_1.jpgFFC260CF-4E00-45E4-B6303A184B446CCE.jpgLarger.jpg)

And then my gun:
http://campl.us/dkSCiOJNiO4 (http://campl.us/dkSCiOJNiO4)

I am accepting criticism, no trolling or super fake nice comments.

Edit: The picture is fixed, clearer now.

Double Edit: I have re-named the thread, I hope you post your own sketches of items too.
Title: Re: My First Sketch
Post by: Sabb on April 13, 2012, 05:23:21 PM
Might want to sketch your lines lighter and gradually work from there. The shadow on the handle is a good example, because we can see where you sketched the end of the shadow. The shadow should be gradual, or I suppose for the style you were drawing a whole value, not outlined otherwise it looks like it's the edge starting the other side.
Title: Re: My First Sketch
Post by: Deacon on April 13, 2012, 08:01:46 PM
that gun (the original) is going to make me have an aneurysm.
Title: Re: My First Sketch
Post by: Seb on April 13, 2012, 08:44:17 PM
Wait, what the fuck?

The hammer is where it's supposed to be, yet it shoots from the bottom chamber?

Good sketch.