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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #45 on: April 02, 2012, 11:46:59 PM »
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I'm going to continue the comic, I suggest NOT reading the thread on somethingaweful, it includes spoilers for some of the deaths, which is the main reason I didn't post it in the first place. I'm going to be using "Monobear" in this version since no one really fits his character and because I don't think a human would fit with what happens later on , if you have any objections I suggest you post it in the other thread, also big thanks to Coolz for making it. Also, just so you can get Monobear's voice in your head posted a part where he talks... which is in japanese.

One more thing, update on OP.
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Ding Dong Ding Dong





Aaaa--- Aaaa--- Mic test, mic test! This is an announcement!

  Is this thing on? They can hear me, right? Ehh... in any case...

It was an easygoing, light voice that was very out of place.
Nevertheless, I couldn’t help but feel heavy discomfort upon hearing it.
It was like a reverberating voice of laughter at the scene of an accident. A discomfort that makes your spine shiver.


   Ehh... All new students. We want to start this year’s entrance ceremony, so please gather at the gymnasium as soon as possible.

And with that, I welcome you all!





Who was that just now?



Relax kid, It was probably the headmaster or whatever they call em'.



But..



You imbeciles can stay behind, I'm going.

Wait for me, dear!



What a quick one.



He might be a little complicated later on.. Hohoho..



If it's just an entrance ceremony we should just go, I mean, what's the worse that can happen, right?



Anyways, I'm off.

Wait we need to stick together!

...

And with that, we headed for the gym.













Lobby



And all this is happening to a police officer.. how ironic.



Doesn't anyone think it's strange that no other classes were here?

It looks like it's just us..



But.. it's all just a joke right?..

Everything will be back to normal and we can go home after..



.....



Stop freaking out will you!?

Let's just go in and get it over with, right now!

Hey! Please don't run you'll hurt yourself!

I'll be going now.

Yea, I'll be going too.

Wait for me as well.



Let's go.

... Mhm



Engulfed in uneasiness and fear, we entered the gymnasium as instructed by the announcement.
What waited for us inside was...




See? Nothing to worry about. I'm always right-

And then, just after Gamefreak said that,
Something happened that made it very clear how “anything but regular” our new surroundings were...


Oy! Is everyone here!? Well then, I think it’s time to begin!!


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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #46 on: April 02, 2012, 11:48:46 PM »
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I don't know what happens in the future, but i think smasters is creepier than that bear.

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #47 on: April 02, 2012, 11:52:33 PM »
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but i think smasters is creepier than that bear.

Smasters must have a sword fight with the bear.

It's totally canon.


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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #48 on: April 06, 2012, 02:45:57 PM »
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I'm going to post this in two parts ._..
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(best track)




Oh my mistake, we're missing pe---

Far out! It's one of those talking teddy bear toys!

Hey, I’m not a toy!

I’m Monobear!

I’m your... I mean this school’s... headmaster, see!!



Nice to meet you all!!

A light voice speaking in an easygoing manner that’s so out of place for a school...
The discomfort that I was still submerged in quickly turned into bottomless fear.




Awwweee It's so cute!



I don't think "cute" describes this toy.



Didn’t you hear me? I’m not a toy...



I’m monobear! Furthermore, your headmaster!



Wahhh~ Did anyone tell you how cute you are when you're angry?♥



..Aren't you being a little too calm with the situation?



The gloomy girl is right, why exactly are we talking through a remote controlled toy?



Hey, don’t make it sound like I’m some kind of a controlled children toys. You’ll sink my feelings deeper than the Mariana Trench...



There’s a control system inside me that can make NASA green with envy...



So I can’t bear letting you say such dream-destroying hurtful things!!



Tch..



Ah--- Anyways..

Stand! Bow! Good morning, you bastards!



How do you do!



Well then. I’d like to begin an opening ceremony you'll remember for life!

To start, I have a short statement regarding you bastards’ school life from this moment on...

Eh-- You bastards are most certainly all geniuses filled with overflowing talent. You bring hope to the world!

In order to preserve and guard that hope...



You will live a communal lifestyle entirely inside this school’s walls from now on!

I hope everyone respects each other and keeps order!I hope everyone respects each other and keeps order!

Huh?..



Eh-- in addition... regarding the extent of this communal lifestyle...

It’s going to be forever!!

In other words, you are going to live here your entire lives! That is the school life we are assigning to you bastards!

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #49 on: April 06, 2012, 02:47:04 PM »
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Live here... forever?..



Ah, there’s nothing to worry about. We have plenty of budget. You bastards won’t lack anything, I promise!



That's not why we're worried!



What do you mean live here forever?..

It's just a joke right?..



I am most certainly not a liar! I have great pride in that!

Ah, I should also let you know: you will be completely shut out from the outside world!

So you shouldn’t be worried anymore about what’s going on in this rotten world we all live in!

Shut out?..



So the steel plates in the classrooms and corridors...

They’re there to... keep us in?



That’s right.

It doesn’t matter how much you shout. No help is coming.

Therefore, you should just make the most out of your life inside the school!



Er, what is this?

What you’re saying, it’s nothing but a huge joke, right?



Cut the crap! If the joke doesn't stop right now I'll beat you into smithereens!

You keep calling it a joke or a lie. It seems you’re still very much doubting me.



But I guess it’s just natural. We’re living in an age where you can’t survive if you trust your neighbours, after all.

In any case, I will let you confirm for yourselves whether my words are true or not.

When you do that, you’ll soon understand that my words are always one hundred percent factual!



Well believe it or not, we don't want to spend the rest of our lives here.



Oh? You’re a weird bunch, aren’t you.

After all, didn’t you all come to this school out on your own volition?

Don’t go on saying you want to go back in the middle of the opening ceremony...

That said...

To be frank, it’s not impossible. There is a way to get out of here...



There is?



As this school’s headmaster, I’ve made a special rule for people who want to leave the school!

It’s a rule called “graduation”!



I’m sure you all want to hear all about it, so let me explain in detail.

As students of this academy, you’re obliged to live your communal lifestyle in an orderly fashion...

But in case someone breaks the order, that person alone can leave the school grounds.

That is the rule called “graduation”!



And what do you mean by breaking order exactly?

Upupu... that is...



The act of killing another person.

Killing!?






Beatingstabbingclubbingbeheadingburningsuffocatingstranglingslaughteringvoodoocursing... The method doesn’t matter.

“Only a student who kills someone can leave”. It’s a very simple rule.

The most evil of actions leads to the best of outcomes. I hope you all cooperate.

Intolerable fear...
The moment I heard the words “Only a student who kills someone can leave” a violent chill ran from my feet through my back all the way to the top of my head.

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #50 on: April 06, 2012, 02:54:43 PM »
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the teddy bear reminds me of teddie!



:D
i imagine his voice to be like teddies

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #51 on: April 06, 2012, 03:01:57 PM »
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does this mean I can kill someone by hooking up 10, 15ft tall amplifiers?

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #52 on: April 06, 2012, 03:12:02 PM »
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This whole thing reminds me of persona 4 and I like it a lot!
And I love persona 4 because of protagonist-kun... he looks like proudly and hes just sexy...
and my favorite character in that game was Rise Kujikawa..

IDGAF IF SHE WAS USELESS.

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #53 on: April 06, 2012, 03:21:44 PM »
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WHAT A TWIST

This is coming along really well and I want to see what happens :)



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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #54 on: April 06, 2012, 03:32:39 PM »
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This whole thing reminds me of persona 4 and I like it a lot!
And I love persona 4 because of protagonist-kun... he looks like proudly and hes just sexy...
and my favorite character in that game was Rise Kujikawa..

IDGAF IF SHE WAS USELESS.
I find it funny you brought that up, lol I JUST finished watching the animated series today so everything is reminding me of persona 4  too ._. I cried when nanako died even though I played the game already and knew she'd die and come back to life
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #55 on: April 06, 2012, 03:39:42 PM »
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I find it funny you brought that up, lol I JUST finished watching the animated series today so everything is reminding me of persona 4  too ._. I cried when nanako died even though I played the game already and knew she'd die and come back to life

NANAKO DIED!! WHAT THE FUCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT:

6:39 PM - Little Red: god i forgot u havent finished
6:39 PM - Proudly Infected: oh yeah i don't beleive you
6:39 PM - Little Red: 6:40 PM - Proudly Infected: why the fuck would you send me this
6:40 PM - Proudly Infected: god dammit
6:40 PM - Proudly Infected: it just spoiled the entire ending

wellp i guess im sleeping on the couch tonight.
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #56 on: April 06, 2012, 03:51:15 PM »
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NANAKO DIED!! WHAT THE FUCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT:

6:39 PM - Little Red: god i forgot u havent finished
6:39 PM - Proudly Infected: oh yeah i don't beleive you
6:39 PM - Little Red: 6:40 PM - Proudly Infected: why the fuck would you send me this
6:40 PM - Proudly Infected: god dammit
6:40 PM - Proudly Infected: it just spoiled the entire ending

wellp i guess im sleeping on the couch tonight.
LOL my bad, I figured you already completed the game
and the animated ending was so much more sad imo because yu---souji seta---the main character actually talks :
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #57 on: April 06, 2012, 04:01:49 PM »
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LOL my bad, I figured you already completed the game
and the animated ending was so much more sad imo because yu---souji seta---the main character actually talks :



thats so fucking sad. jesus christ. I never finished the anime - I liked that protagonist-kun had a voice and was responsive and I liked how it was almost similar to the game - especially his responses lol.

BUT STILL. NEGLECTFUL DAD WAS NEGLECTFUL. FUCK.

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #58 on: April 06, 2012, 04:30:33 PM »
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Nice comic.

We need to make a game out of this.




Thank you Marie for the sprite.

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #59 on: April 06, 2012, 04:34:55 PM »
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Nice comic.

We need to make a game out of this.

>Based off of a Japanese video game for PSP
>okay