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Bullet Rebuttal
« on: March 17, 2012, 09:23:48 PM »
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The beginning is a bit boring and it's not exactly a comic at all until the action comes in, so prepare for that I guess.

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Prologue
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #1 on: March 17, 2012, 09:24:22 PM »
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Update # 2





........ugh..
..wha..........





What just happened?..

I woke up with my head on top of a hard desk.
My entire body was awfully weary.
Of course, I fell asleep in the middle of a boring class before, but...
...but why was I sleeping on top of this desk right now?
Even stranger, I’m in an unfamiliar classroom.


What is happening?









Wh... what is this?
If this is a classroom, there should be windows. But instead...
Things that look like iron plates have been fastened into the walls.
When I tried hitting them with my fist...
*bang* *bang*
As I thought, iron plates. They look quite solid and thick, too.
No, before I even make that analysis, why are there even iron plates here in the first place?




It's the desk I was sleeping on top of until a few minutes ago. There are still traces of saliva on it.


Oh dear.. I'll have to clean that later..



A note for the new students?

  Why, the handwriting is horrible, it looks like as if a child wrote this!

"A new semester has started!”
"A revolutionary new world awaits you bastards inside these school walls." Huh.
What is this thing? Someone's idea of a prank?"




Hmm..

Did someone carry me into this classroom after my nerves caused me to faint when I stepped into the entrance hall?
If that's the case, this classroom must be inside the school building.


Something seems to be out of order, though.

It's weird. Something isn't right.
The iron plates bolted to the windows, and this overwhelming prison-like atmosphere.
I don't understand what it means.


Let's just go to the entrance hall for now...

My classmates will most likely be waiting for me there.





Goodness.., even the corridor is scary.

The mysteries just keep on piling.
And they really are full-blown mysteries.


Anyways, let's get there as quick as possible.







I stepped into the place I was once in earlier.
They waited. 




Ohohoho~ Hello.. are you also a new student?

Um..... yes.., you guys are also?

M-mhm... we're the new students that.. yea..

With you we are all here.

They were the Super High-school Level students chosen by Randomgs Academy.
I slowly looked around at the faces of the kids around me.
It's probably an exaggeration to say they had a special aura around them.




Erm.. Nice to meet you all, my name is Ellie..

It seems I passed out and woke up in a class room causing me to be late..



Is that so?.. The same had happened to me.. Is it a sign?



Hrrmm.. things keep getting stranger and stranger.. don't they?



Ah... this is all wrong, something is most definitively wrong here I tell you!

What are you saying?



You have kept us waiting!



Ellie! Tardiness will not be tolerated!! You must have been told to be here at 8!

Being late on the first day of school is outrageous! I will report this to the school officials and ask for appropriate punishment...



Hmmhmm~ How interesting! I wonder where we are?



Hey wait! Shouldn't we introduce ourselves? For the sake of our classmate who just arrived!



You're right, before we start to discuss the problem at hand, we should get to know at least each other's names.

If we don't even know what to call each other, the conversation can't go very far.



S-she's right.. let's introduce ourselves..

"It's not ideal not knowing what's going on, but for now we'll introduce ourselves."
If that's the case, now's a great chance.
I already looked up information about everyone here on the internet, but now I can confirm what they really are like...
« Last Edit: April 01, 2012, 10:20:05 AM by Purpal »
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 03:13:39 PM »
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Update # 3

I Couldn't get everyone's themes on this update because my internet is shitty and I can't get anything uploaded to tindeck without my router blowing up, I'll be able to get them in a few days hopefully.







Let's hear from these 5 people first.

(no theme)



  My name is Xrain! My motto in life is Simplicity and Fortitude! Let's strive to work together and study hard!


Xrain



Xrain.. According to the Randomgs Academy thread, he was leader of a certain building crew who recently built the "Burj Khalifa", and other famous structures from around the world.




Your name was Ellie, was it?



Ah, Ellie, a truly magnificent and beautiful name! You must thank your parents for naming you so splendidly!



But with such a name, you must act accordingly and keep vigilant day and night!!



There is no greater accomplishment in life than preserving in one's efforts! Don't you agree? That's all there is to it!

What an energetic and enthusiastic guy..

Next





Yes, I see you..



Hello, my name is Purple..


Purple



Purple... the drawings she drew when she was 10 became the talk of the country.
Despite her age she already took home several art awards, and she managed to stay on the best seller list with her paintings while still in high school.
A genious high school girl, calm and peaceful..
...or so I thought.




Pffffahahah, why are you still here? do you.. need.. something?



Hahahahahah, Ellie was your name, right?

Yes.., are you okay?



What are you talking about!? I'm fine! Completely normal! AOK!

Why would you ask that!

Oh.. Sorry! I didn't mean it like that.



No! I'm sorry! I didn't mean to yell! I'm really sorry... goodbye!

How strange..
Much different than I expected her to be


Moving on..





Sup I'm Cakeface, or you can just call me Cake




Cakeface

A bright introduction
He's the musician who play's the guitar
As a musician, he's a popular performer who appears frequently in TV and magazines.
But that wasn't the only reason I was surprised he was a student in this school.
It's something from a while back. He probably doesn't remember it.


Oh? what is it I forgot?

Ehh!? How did you know?



I can read minds.

W-What?



Hahaha, don't get your panties in a bunch, I was just kidding.

Alrighty then..



Now that I think about it..



Aren't you..!

Isn't your name Ellie?

Hey, you two love birds are talking quite a lot!



Ahhahah, sorry, got to go then.

Talk to you later!

Huh.. I hope we will continue talking later.

Next



My name is Tiger! Nice to meet you!

pfffft.


Tiger



The kicker of the country's top high-school football team. A football player who has been noticed by the pro league.
This top-level athlete is...



Ehhh? That's you?



Huh? What's wrong?

It's nothing.. I just.. for a football player..

You imagined someone more muscular didn't you?

I wouldn't say that..



Nah, it's okay.. I'll see you later.

Welp.

Next.



Hello female with boots! My name is Alphaggot, or just Alpha will do.


Alpha

I'm guessing he likes shoes.



Do you know what kind of shoes I'm wearing miss Ellie?

N-No..



Of course you don't!

You can come into my dorm later, I can tell you about each and every pair of shoes I've had since I was 5.

Um..



No need to be shy.

although, it isn't everyday I offer this to someone!

That's surprising.
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #3 on: March 25, 2012, 03:36:05 PM »
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I'll talk to these 5 next.



HIHIHIHIHIHIHIHI



I'm teeny


Teeny


Teeny... She has broken records in every competition she ever participated in, all the way from elementary school to high school.
A skateboard champion. She has perfect strength, figure, proportions... and talent to boot. People often make a big fuss about her on the net.




So.. what is your favorite type of cake??

Cake?.. Hmm.. That would be chocolate cake.



  WHAT?

  But, that doesn't make sense! clearly red velvet cake is the best!

You don't like any other cake?

Well of course I like other cake, but red velvet is the best in the world!



I'm drooling just thinking about them!



There better be red velvet for supper time!

Whatever else, she seems to have an endless supply of energy.





How do you do..? My name is Luna.


Luna



I'm not good at introductions... sorry..



But It's a pleasure to meet you!

Nice to meet you too.



Huh?

Hmm..?

Oh.. nevermind... Sorry..

Um.. No need to be sorry.



Alright..

She's so timid and shy..





Yo! My name's Devie! Great to meet you!


Devie



Devie.. One of the most charismatic high-school girls in the country, a Hair stylist.
But somehow... even though I saw her face on the covers of magazines before...




You give off a different impression in real life.



Huh?



Oh, I see what you're talking about, my magazine right?



I don't care really, I mean I'm not the one making the magazine, now am I? hmhm.

It's the editors, they modified them.

Modified?

Photoshopped! y'know? You've never heard of image editing?

Photoshopped.. I see...



What's with the sad face?



  You should just relax, hmmhmm.

She doesn't seem to care about anything.





Sup bro, I'm Marie.


Marie



I don't think I picked up your profession.. what do you do exactly?



Why, I'm a therapist.

Ehh? Don't you need to go to college to do that?



Who says I haven't already gone?



Or maybe I didn't go at all.



Who knows, bro.

Her mysterious smile contrasts heavily with her words... She’s a person I must be careful around.





...

...

......

C-Can you tell me your name?

...My name is Smasters.


Smasters



Scary.

It wears a.. lunch bag on his head with the letter "S" written on it.. and I can't tell what gender it is either, its voice is muffled and confusing.
I barely got its name.




So, what is your profession?



...Why do I have to tell you?

Well you don't have to..



Then I think I won't.

...It's like its wearing an iron mask. If it won't tell me there's no way to know.
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #4 on: March 25, 2012, 03:41:30 PM »
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Smasters.


Spot on.


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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #5 on: March 25, 2012, 03:44:53 PM »
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Why do Teeny's boobs inflate and deflate?


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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #6 on: March 25, 2012, 03:49:31 PM »
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Why do Teeny's boobs inflate and deflate?
its hard to get the size right everytim--- WOW YOUR CREEPY FOR EVEN NOTICING
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #7 on: March 25, 2012, 04:05:57 PM »
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This is really cool I'm impressed! Keep up the good work :D

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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #8 on: March 25, 2012, 04:07:38 PM »
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Awesome job so far Purple! :D I love my cake part!



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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #9 on: March 25, 2012, 04:29:15 PM »
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Looks great so far Purple! I can't wait for the rest of it, i hope it will be expansive and fun! Keep up the awesome work  :redenvelope:
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #10 on: March 25, 2012, 04:32:51 PM »
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This, this is just super. Great job.

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« Reply #11 on: March 25, 2012, 04:36:40 PM »
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It looks great. Keep up the good work. :)
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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #12 on: March 27, 2012, 03:01:09 PM »
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Normally, I don't like anime.


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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #13 on: March 29, 2012, 05:05:21 PM »
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Almost done, next 5---





I'm Supertoaster.


Supertoaster

“Your nose oh my god.” ...I almost blurted out these dangerous words.
If the day comes when my mouth acts before my brain this way, I will surely be turned into a meatball in seconds.
He’s an expert martial artist and wrestler, who made champion in an international competition held in America...
Having never lost in over 400 matches.




Please stop staring at it..

Sorry! I can't help it.

I'm dead.



It's okay. Not like you're the first one..

I feel horrible..





I'm Don.




I'm Ellie

......

I have never seen someone so reluctant to introduce himself in my life.
But I guess that’s easy to understand.
That guy... he’s special.




This introduction is over you idiotic mongrel.

Or are you planning to stay here all day and listen to this horrible introduction music.

What music?





Hey sexy, my name is Gamefreak.


Gamefreak



Gamefreak... Crowned the king of disco, he’s a dancer with his very own unique style.
To tell the truth, the dancing business doesn’t impress me all that much...
He gives me the creeps to be honest..




So.. you've probably heard about me right, my dear?

Unfortunately, yes.



  Well then, why don't we go get a drink and crash at my hotel?

I don't think high-school students are allowed to drink..



Huh? I'm 20 years old, only failed about 3 grades, it's all good!

About three grades?



Sup I'm Moo..


Moo

Moo.. He's so short.. Is he some sort of cow human? I kind of want to touch the horns...
I slowly move my hand towards his head.. but..




Hey.. HEY! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING!?

DON'T FUCKING TOUCH MY HORNS.

He grunted and slapped my hand away.

Sorry!.. I was curious..

It's.. okay.

Sorry for slapping you, I get angry easily..

I noticed.





Hey, I'm Prox.





He's the current private eye for the FBI.
Police and citizens all over the country respect him.


It's an honor to meet you.



Mhm.

He makes me feel safe but in danger at the same time.


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Re: Bullet Rebuttal
« Reply #14 on: March 29, 2012, 05:09:51 PM »
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LOL, Supertoaster looks like Beavis.