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Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« on: August 18, 2011, 08:49:09 PM »
Pretty much the title. I'll post my most recent one.  :thumbsup: for whomever can tell me it's full meaning first:
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I drift and I drift
In lifes familiar waves
Through them I sift and I sift

Looking for lifes answers
In the cold ruins
The truth skipping away like a dancer

Then one day I stop
And realize I have had it all along
For it is just a tiny little drop

Glistening in the moonlight
That tiny little drop
'Twas my faiths last light

With it I tore asunder
The veil behind my eyes
No more need to ponder

For there I saw
My lifes work
Rough an' raw

The door so great
Hidden in the wall
With I the key for it's mate

I looked down to my feet
And a thousand steps
My eyes did meet

There I stood at the begginning
Trying to climb down
But I just keep ascending

At the very first
A glistening white step
With no thirst

The first few steps above it
Were speckled
Much like a parrot

I saw as I followed my path up
Just a few steps below
Rotten wood were termites did sup

The wood just one step descended
Has rotten planks down low
But someone has mended

I know how He has tried
And I thank him
Even though I have not died

The boards beneath my shoes
Are shifting and changing
As my soul loses it's blues

The boards above me ascended
Are not known to my eyes
As they only are by he that has not sinned

As my gaze descends upon the door
The door of dreams
The door of my core

Inside has long waited
Great mysteries to be found
Where the soul shall be sated

But I cannot truly know
For it may be a fire lying in wait
A golden path does not wait below

My future is beheld with wide eyes
With much fear and joy
In my death the key lays

As I drift back to my mind
Wondering if what I saw is real
Remembering how my steps were lined

Knowing that I can only determine steps to be
Never go back down
My eyes truly don't see

For I will never forget the door again
But I truly care for the steps
Knowing that they were mine to begin
Turned a new leaf.


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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2011, 08:57:03 PM »
Inb4Moo'samazingpoetry.


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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2011, 02:44:40 PM »
Inb4Moo'samazingpoetry.
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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2011, 06:28:11 PM »
I'm not sure about poems, but would a story I wrote in Creative Writing class that was about TF2 count?

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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2011, 05:44:53 PM »
I suppose.
 
Why did I get the idea to put poetry on a gaming forum? l :nomnom:
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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2011, 06:02:32 PM »
I suppose.
 
Why did I get the idea to put poetry on a gaming forum? l :nomnom:
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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2011, 06:30:38 PM »
Lol, that's a good description of TF2.
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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #7 on: August 24, 2011, 08:16:49 PM »
Here's something I wrote:

I am so clean of essence that you can stimulate my genitals with your mouth.

My dark-skinned fellowman:

I am so clean of essence that you can stimulate my genitals with your mouth.

Swag.

I have just emerged from my place of bathing, having resembled an item exceeding the value of one million dollars.

Nigga.

I have never expressed concern for anything.

I am so very clean of essence; swag. You are welcome to stimulate my genitals with your mouth, those which seek intercourse with the biological mothers of my fellowmen.

I carry an expensive diamond on my wrist.

I carry an expensive diamond on my wrist.

My dark-skinned acquaintance, endow me with swag.

Furthermore, you may stimulate my genitals with your mouth.

I have never expressed any concern for uneducated, promiscuous women.

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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #8 on: August 24, 2011, 08:22:09 PM »
Here's something I wrote:

I am so clean of essence that you can stimulate my genitals with your mouth.

My dark-skinned fellowman:

I am so clean of essence that you can stimulate my genitals with your mouth.

Swag.

I have just emerged from my place of bathing, having resembled an item exceeding the value of one million dollars.

Nigga.

I have never expressed concern for anything.

I am so very clean of essence; swag. You are welcome to stimulate my genitals with your mouth, those which seek intercourse with the biological mothers of my fellowmen.

I carry an expensive diamond on my wrist.

I carry an expensive diamond on my wrist.

My dark-skinned acquaintance, endow me with swag.

Furthermore, you may stimulate my genitals with your mouth.

I have never expressed any concern for uneducated, promiscuous women.

Oh god I lol'd.

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"I am okay with this"

next 6 words

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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #9 on: August 26, 2011, 07:52:52 AM »
I have haiku for you guys written by someone that I cannot be arsed to find

You are a dumb fuck
Uninstall your internet
Ok thx bai nao

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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #10 on: August 26, 2011, 04:27:43 PM »
I have haiku for you guys written by someone that I cannot be arsed to find

You are a dumb fuck
Uninstall your internet
Ok thx bai nao

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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #11 on: August 26, 2011, 10:39:45 PM »

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Re: Post any poems or ditties you have composed.
« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2011, 11:32:41 PM »
WAIT WHAT, WE HAVE A LITERATURE BOAR-

Oh yeahhhh, I remember now. It's that section where there hasnt been activity in the last month!

I feel stupid now