Lol go easy on him, its his first map and he has not been able to work on it for over a week because he has been at his relatives...
If i won't go 'hard on him' and say: 'Good job!' Then it's just lying.
For my taste, i like to say things straight. I said it's awful, but i hope he learns, that releasing first maps is kind of stupid. I have never seen GOOD first map.
It's not bad if you show pictures, but anyways
I apology if i was rude to you. Please, go on and make some more maps!