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Offline Myppl9

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Interactive Adventure! ( part 1 )
« on: March 29, 2011, 02:24:59 PM »
This is just a short "choose your adventure" Things i wrote :>


you'r walking down the road in the mysterious wastelands

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Re: Interactive Adventure! ( part 1 )
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2011, 02:38:56 PM »
Not bad.

Some pointers would be to always allow options, a few of those, you could only choose one thing.

It also help to build up an atmosphere. All of those were less than a paragraph. At least give us something to read, and build up the tension, before we make a choice.


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