Correcting English?

[YomoFox]

I have website for my server, and i want make English version.
so i translated with dictionary and google translate but i think there the some English errors, so i would like to fixed...

pages are

*closed*

thanks!

[coolzeldad]

minecraft link is 404 works now

[YomoFox]

Fixed

[coolzeldad]

About page looks good

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Garry's Mod server page

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Garry's Mod Servers
What is Garry's Mod?

Garry's Mod is a sandbox game using the Source Engine which also powers the Half-Life 2 series and more.

Garry's Mod is a physics sandbox. Unlike regular games there aren't any predefined aims or goals. We give you the tools and leave you to play.
From Steam：Garry's Mod

While it is a sandbox game you can also play non-sandbox gamemodes such as Trouble in Terrorist Town.

IP

To connect to the server you need agree to the "Notification" and the rules.

#1: Sandbox ( Wire/SProps/ACF )

IP: sv.hayashigs.com:27015
Max Players: 16
Connect (Steam client will open)

#2: Out of service

IP: sv.hayashigs.com:27016
Max Players: 16
Connect (Steam client will open)

Rules

Do not attempt to annoy other players.
> No prop pushing, killing with explosives, or shooting with guns.
> Revenge toward other players is not tolerated either.
Do not attempt to hurt other players' feelings or impersonate other players.
> Foul language will not be tolerated.
> Copying another person's name will not be tolerated.
Do not attempt to interfere with the smooth operation of the server.
> Do not attempt to lag the server by spawning too many props.
> Do not use any malicious tools.

Recommended Addons

If you have not installed the addons listed below then you may receive error messages in the game.

WireMod
SVN1: https://github.com/wiremod/AdvDuplicator/trunk
SVN2: https://github.com/wiremod/wire/trunk
SVN3: https://github.com/wiremod/wire-extras/trunk

SProps
SVN: http://shadowscions-construction-props.googlecode.com/svn/trunk

ACF Beta
SVN: https://github.com/nrlulz/ACF/trunk

Chat Commands

You can use these commands by typing them into chat.

votekick, voteban, votemap
You can start a vote to kick a player, ban a player, or change the map.

!goto <name>
You can teleport to another player.

Frequently Asked Questions

How can I prevent other players from touching my props?
> In our server, other players cannot touch prop props by default in order to prevent spamming.
> Open the spawnmenu and select "Utility" located on the top right.
> Click "Client" inside the "NADMOD Prop Protection" category.
> Check next to the player's name and click "Apply Friends".

Can I record or broadcast while on this server?
> Feel free to record or broadcast.
> Please do not paste the IP address into the video/broadcast description; please put our website address.

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Minecraft server page

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Minecraft Server
What is Minecraft?

Minecraft is a game involving breaking and placing blocks.

We currently run the normal survival server.

IP

To connect to the server you need agree to the "Notification" and the rules.

#3: Hayashi's Server (Minecraft)

IP: sv.hayashigs.com:25565
Max Players: 10人

Rules

Do not attempt to grief the other players' stuff.
> Do not use fire or lava to grief.
> If you break something accidently, please repair it as best as possible and contact the owner of the stuff.
> If you do not attempt to contact the owner you will be banned.
Do not attempt to steal other players' items.
> Do not attempt to steal from chests.
> Please protect your chest. If it is not protected, and gets stolen from, we will not take any action.
Do not attempt to impair the landscape.
> When building a house, please consider the landscape of the town.
> Also, when chopping trees please make sure to not leave any leaves.
Do not attempt to abuse bugs or hack.
> Do not attempt to use any tool like an X-ray mod, and do not abuse any item duplication bugs.

Chat commands

You can use these commands by typing them into chat.

Protection for Chest, Door, Sign, and Furnace

When you place a chest, protection will automatically activate in order to prevent stealing.
If you want to unlock your chest then please use the appropriate command.

Command   Description
/cprivate <Name>   Makes it so only you have access.
If you want to allow other players, type their name after a space.
/cpublic   Makes it so anyone can use it but they cannot break it.
This is useful for a public chest.
/cpassword <Password>   Just like cprivate except it requires a password.
/cunlock <Password>   Remove /cpassword protection.
/cremove   Removes protection altogether.

Teleportation

Command   Description
/home   Teleport to position that was set with /sethome
/spawn   Teleport to the spawn point.

[YomoFox]

many thanks coolz

i'm would like to ask :

How can I prevent other players from touching my props?

I meant situation like "hey i want copy your thing!" "yes.. but how can i make it he can use toolgun?" so its invalid? or i'm pool at english lol

I updated website, if anyone want check feel free to visit

[coolzeldad]

many thanks coolz

i'm would like to ask :
I meant situation like "hey i want copy your thing!" "yes.. but how can i make it he can use toolgun?" so its invalid? or i'm pool at english lol

I updated website, if anyone want check feel free to visit

Ah, then I would change that section to:

How can I allow other players to touch my props?
In our server, other players cannot touch prop props by default in order to prevent abuse.
Prop ProtectionOpen the spawnmenu and select “Utility” located on the top right.
Click “Client” inside the “NADMOD Prop Protection” category.
Check next to the player’s name and click “Apply Friends”.
Now your friends can touch your props.

Also, on 3rd Garry's Mod Server rule I think this phrase is repeated twice "do not use malicious tools". You should remove the extra.

Also, on Minecraft page chat commands, I think command /cprivate mispelled ( cpritvate ).

Everything else looks good.

[YomoFox]

fixed! now anyone still wants something fixed post it!

or i'm going put this to main website tomorrow

[coolzeldad]

On third Garry's Mod server rule where you removed the duplicate phrase, now you need to remove "." after "props"

Do not attempt to lag the server by spawning too many props and do not use any malicious tools.

Otherwise it's all good imo.

[YomoFox]

Fixed! Now looks like fine so i'm closing this.
thank you!11111