In my opinion I like the shot, such as the colors, fresnel highlights, and posing, but I think the blank spaces in the top left and right are awkward. You could fiddle with the fov and/or moving some of your assests.
I'm sorry. If you got any ideas for anything related to SFM post them down here. Scenarios, scenes, plots and all that.
Make a CSGO showdown with most of the characters -- but replace their guns with fruits.