my first 2 maps

[triggerhappy]

I know that most of you don't know me but I just wanted to get some feedback of some maps i was working on. They are my first attempts at making a map using source sdk and i have a long way to go before i actually finish them.

http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198030325664/screenshot/559821183656717744?tab=public
http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198030325664/screenshot/559821183656714961?tab=public
http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198030325664/screenshot/559821183656609225/?tab=public

[Tezuni]

Good job with the basics.
May I suggest you check out these?

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1. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Hammer_Hotkey_Reference
2. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/List_of_entities

3. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Sky_List
4. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Sound_and_Music
5. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Breakable_Glass
6. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Beams_and_Lasers
7. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Dust,_Fog,_%26_Smoke
8. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Fire
9. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Cables_and_Ropes

[yoshi]

Looks good so far, i wonder how it will look like when you put the textures and lighting there now.

[Cable]

I suggest putting something around the map so it doesn't seem like its floating in the sky.
You should also watch a few tutorials on lighting. Then puts some lights in there and kick full brights ass.

[» Magic «]

Looking good so far