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ITS AN ESSAY! WRITTEN BY SANDERS.
Cake Faice:
I could do an essay on this one car I would soon to have...but im not that essay type of person.
Cheesicle:
My brothers car was totaled by a texting driver. My bro stopped at the red light, and the moron behind him wasn't paying attention and slammed into the back of his car, also causing my brother to smash into the car in front of him. Good thing Toyota has good safety. (Don't believe those shitty ass rumors people spread.) That good 'ol 2010 Toyota Corolla S edition saved his life :) My bro got out without a scratch :D
But the car.... Damaged beyond repair. Sent to the junkyard and scrapped... Poor car :( I actually liked it :'(
ursus:
holy balls i just read that entire thing
--- Quote from: Sanders on November 30, 2010, 08:11:34 PM ---Due to the worries about producing enough uranium in time to be helpful another plant, "S-50", a thermal diffusion type plant, was constructed.
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The grammar of this sentence seems wrong... it seems like there should be a comma after "helpful"
How about
"However, there were worries about producing enough uranium in time to be sufficiently helpful. To remedy this, a thermal diffusion type plant named "S-50" was constructed."
I know my opinion isn't worth two shits since college is srs business, but DEAR GOD THAT SENTENCE
Devie:
--- Quote from: gamefreak171 on November 30, 2010, 09:13:30 PM ---holy balls i just read that entire thing
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you sir, deserve a medal for that. :ethermedallion:
Bovicide:
fixed
enjoy your 5 commas in one sentence
--- Quote from: Moolz ♥ on November 30, 2010, 09:23:04 PM ---you sir, deserve a medal for that. :ethermedallion:
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mfw he gets medal for reading something that took me 100x longer to write
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