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Kinda in a bad situation... Anybody read the book "Ender's Game"?
Pryvisee:
--- Quote from: gamefreak on January 12, 2011, 06:29:11 PM ---Oh fuck, Ender's Game is my favorite book of ALL TIME. Not even kidding.
I don't even know how Steven Spielberg is like Ender. Have you even read the book?
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Shiiiit. We were just talking about this on steam.. :-[
Should of asked you if you read the book.
EDIT: Well I've gotten the last parts of the paper.
I just need somone to proof read it.
--- Quote ---Dillon Fahey
Mrs. Q.
A4 English – World Leader Paper
13 January 2011
Steven Spielberg
Steven Spielberg revolutionized the art of making movies. He’s done major hits in his movie making career. He has done, “Jaws”, “E.T” and “Saving Private Ryan” to name a few. And he has also executively produced others like “Transformers” one and two. He’s a great leader and a idol to people wanting to produce or direct a movie.
The respect Steven Spielberg has landed him in all sorts of places. From the Emmy’s to guest staring on TV shows. The respect started when he released the film “E.T”. It was a amazing film back in the day and still is. Almost everyone knows the name Steven Spielberg.
Steven Spielberg has struggled through life and succeeded with a dream. The divorce of Steven Spielbergs parents was devastating and Ender’s break up with his family was an example of that. Ender had a hard decision to make. Go with colonel Graff or stay with his parents. Much like Steven had to choose between which parent to go with. Each of which, turned out to be a good decision.
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Eh?
ursus:
--- Quote from: Pryvisee on January 12, 2011, 06:35:51 PM --- The respect Steven Spielberg has landed him in all sorts of places. From the Emmy’s to guest staring on TV shows.
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Emmys doesn't have an apostrophe. You spelled "starring" wrong. There needs to be a comma inbetween "places" and "From", not a period. The first sentence isn't even an actual sentence.
Pryvisee:
--- Quote from: gamefreak on January 12, 2011, 07:15:03 PM ---Emmys doesn't have an apostrophe. You spelled "starring" wrong. There needs to be a comma inbetween "places" and "From", not a period. The first sentence isn't even an actual sentence.
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Thanks! Any more that needs to be corrected?
ursus:
--- Quote from: Pryvisee on January 12, 2011, 07:16:28 PM ---Thanks! Any more that needs to be corrected?
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Dillon Fahey
Mrs. Q.
A4 English – World Leader Paper
13 January 2011
Steven Spielberg
Steven Spielberg revolutionized the art of making movies, as well as having done major hits in his career. He has produced “Jaws”, “E.T.” and “Saving Private Ryan”, to name a few. He has also held the position of executive producer for others like the more recent "Transformers" productions. He’s a great leader and a role model to people wanting to produce or direct a movie.
The respect Steven Spielberg commandeers has landed him in all sorts of places, from the Emmys to guest starring on TV shows. His fame all started when he released the film “E.T”. It was an amazing film for its time and still is. As an indirect result of this, almost everyone in our modern day and age knows the name Steven Spielberg.
Steven Spielberg has struggled through life with nothing more than a dream, and succeeded. The divorce of Steven Spielberg's parents was devastating to him, and Ender’s parting with his family was a similar example of that. Ender had a hard decision to make: Go with colonel Graff or stay with his parents and sister Valentine. This is much like how Steven had to choose between which parent to go with, each of which turned out to be a good decision.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)It's still not a great paper, but I just made it suck a little less.
Pryvisee:
--- Quote from: gamefreak on January 12, 2011, 07:26:34 PM ---Dillon Fahey
Mrs. Q.
A4 English – World Leader Paper
13 January 2011
Steven Spielberg
Steven Spielberg revolutionized the art of making movies, as well as having done major hits in his career. He has produced “Jaws”, “E.T.” and “Saving Private Ryan”, to name a few. He has also held the position of executive producer for others like the more recent "Transformers" productions. He’s a great leader and a role model to people wanting to produce or direct a movie.
The respect Steven Spielberg commandeers has landed him in all sorts of places, from the Emmys to guest starring on TV shows. His fame all started when he released the film “E.T”. It was an amazing film for its time and still is. As an indirect result of this, almost everyone in our modern day and age knows the name Steven Spielberg.
Steven Spielberg has struggled through life with nothing more than a dream, and succeeded. The divorce of Steven Spielberg's parents was devastating to him, and Ender’s parting with his family was a similar example of that. Ender had a hard decision to make: Go with colonel Graff or stay with his parents and sister Valentine. This is much like how Steven had to choose between which parent to go with, each of which turned out to be a good decision.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)It's still not a great paper, but I just made it suck a little less.
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I... Love.. u.
Thanks so much!
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