You're kidding me, right?
What in the earth are you thinking?
If you're going to use dev textures, try even use something else than some monitor or what ever texture you have there. Do you use nodraw at all?
I always found your criticism too constructive.
As for the map,
http://forum.randomgs.com/index.php/topic,2346.0.html (http://forum.randomgs.com/index.php/topic,2346.0.html)
and then, just today some guy copied that (2 trucks sitting by one another gave it away)
http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=126054 (http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=126054)
but i just gave it a smirk and didn't care
but other than that, it was my first map and it was the secret that got it removed and that fucking conveyor belt.
I am sure you know what NOT to put in your map.
And if you want the .vmf for that map, I would be glad to give it.