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Creative Arts (Read Only) => Literature => Topic started by: blαh2355 on March 18, 2011, 01:54:59 PM

Title: WWII essay (fictional)
Post by: blαh2355 on March 18, 2011, 01:54:59 PM
Well this project was about a few months ago for my english class and now I want to share it. It's very long on the forums so don't say I didn't warn you (tl;dr peeps). It's a little eh and not that great since I'm a bad writer but here you go. Also if you want to read it in Word (2010 format) you can download from here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1n-pBFhgsawNhpYCJSpNckNy4hppfK5fqKbwk_AiXS9Q/edit?hl=en&authkey=CLmg4ccB

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Title: Re: WWII essay (fictional)
Post by: Foofoojack on March 18, 2011, 02:00:56 PM
Very nice story line, but kind of bland.
Y'know, i've read alot of things like this.
Just MO
Title: Re: WWII essay (fictional)
Post by: Rocket50 on March 19, 2011, 06:25:19 PM
Hi there Gary Chow

I have also written a short story for socials about 'Louis Riel'; a Canadian hero to some, a villian to others. It is the third-person perspective of Thomas Scott, an Orangemen who was eventually  executed by Louis Riel. (Canadian history ftl.)

Beginning = Okayish pace, end = faster than fucking Chuck Norris on Crack.

Why? Because the maximium number of paces for this was four pages, and guess what? This was exactly four pages.

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