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Title: Essay Advice?
Post by: Rocket50 on February 26, 2011, 08:13:41 PM
I have written an essay for English comparing the similar poetic devices that are used in "Sonnet 18" and "Sonnet 116" which are both written by Shakespeare. Any advice on how to improve it?

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Title: Re: Essay Advice?
Post by: Foofoojack on February 26, 2011, 08:19:13 PM
Tab the beginning of /all/ of your paragraphs. Not just some. Looks good tho.
Title: Re: Essay Advice?
Post by: Rocket50 on February 26, 2011, 08:35:29 PM
Tab the beginning of /all/ of your paragraphs. Not just some. Looks good tho.

I did on paper, it just doesnt show here
Title: Re: Essay Advice?
Post by: Foofoojack on February 26, 2011, 08:38:00 PM
I did on paper, it just doesnt show here
Oh alright.
Title: Re: Essay Advice?
Post by: ursus on February 26, 2011, 08:38:21 PM
I would read it, but holy shit. Just a wall of text. No thanks.